Here's my story for the Bartleby sentence.
I'll collect everyone's together and post links tomorrow.
The Job
Then, suddenly, with great clarity and precision, he saw Bartleby's window and the blank brick wall before him.
The wall.
Always the same.
It stared him down.
Browbeat him.
The early morning sun burned the bricks a violent orange that hurt his eyes but it was not the squinting brilliance that he found intimidating.
It was the purity.
The very blankness.
The effrontery of it all.
It was Bartleby …
For blocks all around, every surface within reach of an outstretched arm was a scribbled tangle of graffiti. Layer after layer of tags and murals and adolescent brag and bluster festooned and swagged across wall and window, shutter and trashcan.
Yet no paint touched Bartleby's wall.
Ever.
The bright bricks briefly dazzled him; a malevolent, blazing tabula rubra. He shaded his eyes against their glare.
The wall was around fifty feet long and went up three storeys. Bartleby's window sat just off centre on the middle floor; a stark, black hole into nothingness.
He couldn't see in.
There were no other windows.
There was no door; at least not out front.
He stood across the street and waited as he always waited in what had once been the doorway of a laundry but was now - like so much else here - utterly derelict; trashed, tagged, beaten and left for dead.
He looked at the payphone.
The only undamaged payphone for ten blocks; it stood at one end of Bartleby's pristine wall.
He waited.
He never had to wait long. Somebody would be behind the window watching him; maybe even Bartleby himself, though somehow he doubted that.
The phone would ring three times and he would leave, returning home to find in his mailbox the familiar A4 manila envelope containing a quantity of cash and Bartleby's enigmatic instructions.
The payphone rang.
He left.
He never walked straight back to his apartment but invariably varied his route in a determined attempt at discontinuity.
Some days he would stop for latte and a bagel; others he would browse the bookstores or linger at the library; maybe buy some groceries.
Today he walked to the nearest Metro station and caught a train to the park.
At this hour there were still empty benches. He sat in the shade of a plane tree, waited for a hefty jogger to pound past and opened his attaché case.
Trying not to think of what would be waiting for him at the apartment he read a couple of chapters of Auster's New York Trilogy.
He liked these stories. He liked to lose himself in the characters' Odyssean wanderings; the repetitive interactions between strangers; the vaguely mysterious yet ultimately futile assignments that ruled their lives.
Much like his own …
The envelope was there in his mailbox.
Back in the apartment he closed the blind against the sun and poured himself a stiff scotch, then sat with the envelope on his lap and reached for his letter-opener.
Taking out the single sheet of paper he began to read.
17 comments:
aaarrrrrggghhhhhhhh! you can't leave me hanging like that, sugar!!! WHAT HAPPENED NEXT?????? xoxxo
great story!
Oooo, how mysterious, and how clever of you to weave in the actual stories from which you pulled this week's sentence. Now I'll have to read them.
"adolescent brag and bluster festooned and swagged" is such a great string of words. You can feel it as you read.
NICE! I too almost went down the graffti path. Weird mind meld for sure.
Oh, and I posted my story just a minute ago.
Savannah: Thank you!
I have no idea what happened next. I didn't read the piece of paper from Bartleby.
xoxox
Robyn and Prudence:
I'm too busy and hassled at the office today to check blogs but tomorrow I shall round up all your stories and enjoy a good read with my breakfast before posting them.
And yes, Robyn; I tried to write as if my characters were part of one of Auster's stories; if you read the New York Trilogy you'll see how his characters are in the thrall of weird tasks and how he inveigles himself as a kind of character/cypher into City Of Glass.
It's a fun book.
. . . he began to read. "Dear John . . . "
What other kind of letter could it be? What's that you say? He and Bartleby weren't lovers? But the title is The Job. Oh. Wrong type of job. Never mind.
(Nice job, Dive! lol)
How Agatha Christie!!! I want to read the rest. Uh...is there a rest? Tell me there is.
I loved it Dive. Very cerebral and mysterious. The writing is beautiful. Mine is mo "in yo face." Heehee. It is shit, but I do not profess to be a writer. Most of all it has been fun. BTW Your wall has been tagged!
Technical question -
"tabula rubra"
Google credits it to you alone.
Can you explain it for me? Your meaning?
it's off the subject, but they're letting squeaky fromme out of prison in a couple of weeks:
http://www.nytimes.com/2009/08/06/us/politics/06fromme.html?_r=1&hp
Excellent story! And great take-off of Auster's trilogy. You capture the spirit of it well.
Looking forward to reading the other stories, too! [Unfortunately, I've not had time to do a story for this week. Things have been too crazy. Maybe next time.]
Done.
God I enjoyed that. :)
Cali: Ah, your mind is forever on the … er … job. Nice one.
Katherine: There is - as you well know - NO rest for the wicked!
Hee hee.
Sorry, I couldn't let that one go.
Neetzy: Thank you. Yours is indeed "in yo face". Wonderful dialogue! You may not profess to be a writer but a writer you most certainly are.
Kate: Wow! Google credits it to me alone? Yay! I've always wanted a Googlewhack and now I've got one.
It's actually a pitiful pun in Latin.
The wall was going to be a "tabula rasa"; a blank sheet/table, the only unblemished wall in the neighbourhood, just itching to be scribbled on.
But tabula rasa usually refers to a white, unwritten page and the wall was bright orangey-red brickwork so rasa became rubra (from "ruber" - red).
Dull, and pretty poor as puns go, but you did ask.
Trish: They are? Cool! I wonder if Katie's "Squeaky" knows?
Ms.M: You are so sweet! Thank you. At last someone else who has read Auster and appreciated him. Yay, you!
I do hope you can join in next week. It's fun!
Kate: I did, too. Your story scared the crap out of me. Hee hee.
The best thing I've read all day (ok, I've only read my blog so far); seriously brilliant in the best page-turning, spy-thrilling, kind of way. :0
Mme, you are too, too kind.
My mind might be forever on the job, but my eye is always on the ball. ;-)
Hee hee!
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